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A letter to the President of IOC

Gading serpong 1A / AG 13 #22, Tanggerang

July 27th, 2oo8

International Olympic Committee
St. Venue Street 28, USA

Dear Mr Roosevelt,

I am the head of Indonesian Sports Club. I always watched the Olympic Games whenever it occurred, and I always wanted to see it live.

I want come to the next Olympic Games, but the money that our club collects only enough for our members. I do not have any more money to purchase a trip. While I am seeking for more sponsors, I found out that there is a chance to win a free trip.

Also, this year my best friend is competing in the next Olympic Games, but her family cannot accompany her because they are very busy recently. She asked me to accompany her on the next Olympic Games.

My best friend is very important for me. She is very easily depressed. She already spent a lot of money to join the Olympic Games and it will be so painful if she feel depressed and withdraw.

My job is also very important. I already work for 10 years and finally I am become the head of Indonesian Sports Club. If I missed an event, our members will think that I do not deserve to be a leader just like the last leader.

Please send any information according to your decision of this letter to the address above or my email adsfjkl@yahoo.com.

I would like to thank you for a chance to win this trip and for your attention to this letter.

Sincerely yours,

(Lusia K. P.)

lkp


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Evaluation City A, B, and C

Dear Mr Waikoloa,

According to the evaluation of City A, B, and C, I think the best city to be chosen is City B.

From the climate, City A and C could make the athletes easily fatigue. Furthermore, city B already has the biggest amount of venues, an advanced transportation ready to use, and the city is more secure.

I hope my recommendation could be considered. Thank you for the attention.

Sincerely yours,

(Lusia K.P.)

(President of IOC)