Senin, 09 Maret 2009

A Letter

SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Jalan Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia

March 9th, 2009

Admission Office
Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT)
77 Massachusetts Avenue, Rm 3-108
Cambridge, MA 02139-4307

Dear Sir/Madam,

I write this letter to know SAT and TOEFL minimum score in order to apply for the computer science department. Also, I want to know if SAT 2 is necessary.

I am a student from Indonesia and going to graduate in year 2010. I am interested in computer science and I have heard from many sources that MIT have the best computer science department.

Finally, I want to express my gratitude and also I can be contacted by email in lusimail@yahoo.com.

Faithfully Yours,

Lusia Kristiana

1 komentar:

Teguh Santoso mengatakan...

Hi, Lusia,
First, congratulations to your winning 1st National programming competition in UNPAR and 1st I.T. Competition in Maranatha Bandung.
See:
http://www.bpkpenabur.or.id/en/school/smakgsjkt

About your letter, have you sent it to MIT Admission office?

Good work! Let me know if they respond (or do not respond) to your email. Don't forget also to write a CLEAR heading/subject of email.

P.S. please replace "want" with "would like" and "can" with "could" to make it more polite and formal.